The past two weeks we have been learning how to write descriptive pieces of writing. My DLO shows I can publish my writing online and add images. My writings both started the same way. We read the example, wrote a plan then used the keywords in our plan to write. Have you ever written descriptive writing? We used no digital sources for this, we just used our books.
A Dream In Paradise
As I stand on an isolated island I'm greeted with the smell of strong salty water. And a view of light aquamarine water and emerald green swaying shrubs. Snowy White fluffy clouds float above my head. I can hear a roaring motor engine start, along with that the waves start crashing harder. A cool light breeze brushes against my face and the lukewarm water fills me with happiness. My tongue prickles with the taste of salty water.
My amazing bedroom
My favourite part of our house is my amazing bedroom.I personally love my bedroom because it has been personalized. On a nice day it is sunny, warm and naturally lit.
In my squarish room you can see my king's single bed. Next to my bed is my book nook.at the end of my book nook is my bookshelf. If I could change something it would be my wallpaper, usually you can find me reading a good book on my bed.
My room is usually tidy except for the occasional mess. unlike the rest of my family who always have clothes and shoes all over the floor. plus it always stinks in their rooms.
In my room you can smell fresh air and sour grape lollipop you can snuggle down on my super comfy bed . You can hear the harsh wind banging against the window.
My bedroom is definitely my favorite place in our house and it always makes me feel loved.
