Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts

Friday, 9 July 2021

The best part of me.

 This week we learnt about poetry. We learnt about how an effective poem has repetition and ryhming. How a poem is written to express feelings or ideas and how words are chosen by their beauty and meaning. My digital learning object is my poem. We went black and white theme, then published our poem, then had photos taken of the best part of us.This poem writing went well because I love poetry although I found it tricky to come up with a fourth idea  for my poem.Have you written a poem before ? If so , what was it about?

Friday, 21 May 2021

My amazing bedroom and a dream in paradise.

The past two weeks we have been learning how to write descriptive pieces of writing. My DLO shows I can  publish my writing online and add images. My writings  both started  the same way. We read the example, wrote a plan then used the  keywords in our plan  to write. Have you ever  written descriptive writing? We used no digital sources for this, we just used our books.

A Dream In Paradise

 

As I stand  on an isolated island  I'm greeted with the smell of  strong salty water. And a view of light aquamarine water and emerald green swaying shrubs. Snowy White fluffy clouds float above  my head. I can hear a roaring motor engine start, along with that the waves start crashing harder. A cool light breeze brushes against my face and the lukewarm water fills me with happiness. My tongue prickles with the taste of salty water.


My amazing bedroom

My favourite  part of our house is my amazing bedroom.I personally love my bedroom because it has been personalized. On a nice day it is sunny, warm and naturally lit.

In my squarish room you can see my king's single  bed. Next to my bed   is my  book nook.at the end of my book nook is my bookshelf.  If I could  change something it would be my wallpaper, usually you can find  me reading  a good book on my bed.

My room is usually tidy except for  the occasional mess. unlike the rest of my family who always have clothes and shoes all over the floor. plus it always stinks in their  rooms.

In my room you can smell fresh air and sour grape lollipop you can snuggle down on my super comfy bed . You can hear the harsh wind banging against the window.


My bedroom is definitely my favorite place in our house and it always makes me feel loved.

Thursday, 11 June 2020

energy

How does electricity get into our switches? 
Electricity starts by going through an amazing process . First it starts at the powerstation where they use renewable and non renewable Fuels to spend a turbine which using magnets creates electricity. next it goes it goes through the National grid to a transformer which Boosts the energy. Next it travels through underground cables . and while that happens that energy is reduced so it can come into the electric plug so I can read and drink my Milo.

Wednesday, 27 May 2020

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Monday, 16 March 2020

Tuesday, 11 February 2020

Nau mai, haere mai

Nau mai, haere mai!
Welcome to my blog for learning.
I look forward to sharing my learning with my school,
my whānau and friends everywhere.