This week we learnt about poetry. We learnt about how an effective poem has repetition and ryhming. How a poem is written to express feelings or ideas and how words are chosen by their beauty and meaning. My digital learning object is my poem. We went black and white theme, then published our poem, then had photos taken of the best part of us.This poem writing went well because I love poetry although I found it tricky to come up with a fourth idea for my poem.Have you written a poem before ? If so , what was it about?
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Friday, 9 July 2021
Friday, 21 May 2021
My amazing bedroom and a dream in paradise.
The past two weeks we have been learning how to write descriptive pieces of writing. My DLO shows I can publish my writing online and add images. My writings both started the same way. We read the example, wrote a plan then used the keywords in our plan to write. Have you ever written descriptive writing? We used no digital sources for this, we just used our books.
A Dream In Paradise
As I stand on an isolated island I'm greeted with the smell of strong salty water. And a view of light aquamarine water and emerald green swaying shrubs. Snowy White fluffy clouds float above my head. I can hear a roaring motor engine start, along with that the waves start crashing harder. A cool light breeze brushes against my face and the lukewarm water fills me with happiness. My tongue prickles with the taste of salty water.
Friday, 3 July 2020
Thursday, 11 June 2020
energy
Electricity starts by going through an amazing process . First it starts at the powerstation where they use renewable and non renewable Fuels to spend a turbine which using magnets creates electricity. next it goes it goes through the National grid to a transformer which Boosts the energy. Next it travels through underground cables . and while that happens that energy is reduced so it can come into the electric plug so I can read and drink my Milo.

